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@ 2006-11-15 23:22:00
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Entry tags:fanfiction, harry potter, remus/severus

Chapter Four: A Future Affair
Title: A Future Affair
Chapter:Four
Author: [info]songofthepoets
Genre: Romance/General
Rating: PG13 (for now)
Characters: Youth!Severus, Youth!Remus, Adult!Snape, Adult!Lupin, Dumbledore, Harry, Draco.
Pairings: Snape/Remus, Lupin/Severus, Severus/Remus, Snape/Lupin, Harry/Draco.
Warnings: Slash, Staff/Student, Adult/Youth
Summary: What happens when Severus and Remus are transported to the
future, and either boy falls for the other's future self?
Disclaimer: Characters owned by J.K. Rowling.



Chapter 4-Professor Remus J. Lupin

Severus had realized long before Lupin had that the person he would meet would be his adult self. In fact, he had realized it the moment Dumbledore had informed them of the person who would remind themselves of themselves. He wasn't surprised that he wasn't nervous or excited to meet his future self. After all, it was just himself but older. The thing that made him nervous was the fact that he would be meeting Remus's older self. Remus at their age now intimidated him enough as it was (though he hated to admit it). He couldn't imagine how this older, smarter Professor Lupin would make him feel. At least with Remus he could mask his nerves with cold silence; with this teacher, he could no longer do that.

Malfoy took him to McGonagall's office, who was Deputy Headmistress and handled all the schedules, the next morning rather than straight away. She also informed him of the classes and tests that he and Remus solely would have to sit through. He glanced over his and immediately tasted something sour in his mouth. The first person he would have to meet was indeed Professor Remus J. Lupin. Swallowing hard, he startled slightly when a hand was placed on his shoulder. He looked up into Malfoy's dark grey eyes. The boy smirked.

"I can't imagine what you must feel, about to meet your own self," he said. "Everything I've ever known about time-travel says that a person is never supposed to see themselves. What's happening now is going against everyone of those rules."

Severus nodded. He, too, had been thinking the exact same thing since the moment they arrived in Dumbledore's office. Suddenly his eyes widened and he swore softly.

"Er, Draco," he said slowly. "What day is today?" Malfoy shrugged.

"It's the twenty-third," he drawled uncaringly. A string of curses and hexes ran through Severus's mind. He was supposed to have met with Lucius Malfoy in Hogsmede to discuss some kind of proposition the man had. He groaned but for some reason had a sudden calm about missing the meeting. Instead of worrying any further, be shrugged uncaringly himself before sighing.

"Never mind, it doesn't matter," he said in answer to Malfoy's questioning face. "Anyway, I should head to Defense. There's no need to hang around."

Malfoy shrugged and headed off for the stairs as Severus made his way down the corridor that held the Defense Against the Dark Art's class. He found it with ease and entered just as Remus was leaving. They collided into one another and a loud smack echoed the hallway.

"Ow, sorry, Severus," he said and smiled. "Professor...er, Lupin asked me to find you. You're late, you know?"

Severus sighed and nodded. "Yes, I realized, Remus. Let's get in so that I'm not any more late than I already am."

Standing, Remus offered the Slytherin his hand which Severus took. The Gryffindor helped him to his feet and the two of them entered the class once more, Severus following Remus to the very front of the room. The teacher at the desk looked up and Severus blinked as he took in the man before him. He didn't realize he was stairing until Remus elbowed him. Clearing his throat, he took a seat a few chairs from Remus's and looked up at the man. Professor Lupin watched him for a moment before smiling.

"Since Mr. Snape has kindly joined us, we may now start the test," he said and Severus found himself listening more intently than he ever had in his life. What was this man doing to him? Did he spell him?

Lupin picked up his wand from his desk and flicked it first at the desk in front of Remus and then at the desk in front of Severus.

"You may begin," he said. "You have one hour to complete the test. Oh, and Mr. Snape. I'll see you in detention tonight right after dinner."

Severus wanted to smack the smirk right of of the man's face but bit his lip hard and began the test.




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[info]technicolornina
2006-11-16 12:38 am UTC (link)
Very nice. Very unusual!

Just one thing: It's "McGonagall," not "McGonnagal." Just so you know . . .

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[info]songofthepoets
2006-11-16 01:00 am UTC (link)
*headdesk* It's mistakes like that that get you locked up in Azkaban... or something to that effect. You know, I know the spelling but apparently my fingers do not. Thanks a bunch.

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[info]technicolornina
2006-11-16 01:10 am UTC (link)
LOL. It's okay . . . the one that gets me is people who do stupid stuff like "Hermoin," "Dumbelldor" (<-- I swear I've seen it), and "Nevil."

On the whole, I'd say it's a good story. It feels a little rushed, I'd try to slow it down a little bit - and it's a bit unrealistic in terms of how people are reacting. You've got the Headmaster down to a T, but I don't think everyone else would take it so calmly. Try going for a little shock value in upcoming "meetings," it'll add a lot to the story. (Obviously the staff knows who they are, but that doesn't mean it's going to be "normal" for them . . . )

Overall, excellent idea, though. Keep writing ^_^

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[info]songofthepoets
2006-11-16 01:16 am UTC (link)
xD. You try and write a fic like this. :p Not as easy as it looks. And don't worry. I do believe that McGonagall would be calm. Lupin too, because I mean, he's a werewolf (as if that explains why the answer to the universe is 42. >>). Snape will deffinately spazz, and the students in chapter three were staring. There will definatly be shocked people. It'll just be belated. xD

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[info]technicolornina
2006-11-16 01:31 am UTC (link)
Sweetheart, are you familiar with RENT? I just wrote a story where Wilson falls through time and meets ANGEL. Not himself, his onstage ALTEREGO. Believe me, I've written stories like this.

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[info]songofthepoets
2006-11-16 01:37 am UTC (link)
xDD. I was just justifying my story's not-so-greatness. I think a lot have written stories that are somewhat like this. xD

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[info]technicolornina
2006-11-16 08:43 pm UTC (link)
Actually, I've only seen two others like this in the HP fandom, so you're way ahead of the game. Me, I just let myself get sick, take some Ny-Quil, and whatever insanity results, I call it a story. (Amazingly, people usually LIKE it.)

You've got a great start here, I just think you're going too fast (something that happens to a lot of authors, I've noticed) and that maybe people should be a little more incredulous.

Just slow it down a little, and it'll go from "good" to "really great."

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[info]songofthepoets
2006-11-20 06:41 pm UTC (link)
^^ Thanks a bunch for your help. xD

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[info]sunnyrea
2006-11-16 12:39 am UTC (link)
Omg this is fucked up.... I can't wait for the next chapter

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[info]songofthepoets
2006-11-16 01:01 am UTC (link)
I hope that's fucked up in a good way. Thanks.

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[info]sunnyrea
2006-11-16 01:11 am UTC (link)
Yes in a good way :-p

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[info]songofthepoets
2006-11-16 01:17 am UTC (link)
Yey, goodie.

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[info]trustingfrndshp
2006-11-16 04:31 am UTC (link)
Ooh, Ooh, I'm getting giddy w/anticipation for what might happen in detention;-)

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[info]songofthepoets
2006-11-16 04:40 am UTC (link)
*smiles* You seem to think that something is going to happen in detention. *smirks* Well, that depends on what you want to happen, whether that something is going to happen.

Basically, yes, something is going to happen, but for all you know, it might just be Lupin making Severus write lines.

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[info]isildurs_babe
2006-11-17 12:02 am UTC (link)
Loving this :)

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[info]songofthepoets
2006-11-20 06:43 pm UTC (link)
Glad you are. :)

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[info]xobasket_casexo
2006-11-19 07:58 pm UTC (link)
*huggles*
yet another amazing chapter
*goes to read next chapter*

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[info]songofthepoets
2006-11-20 06:50 pm UTC (link)
*smiles* Thanks.

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[info]subliminal_red
2006-12-13 09:07 pm UTC (link)
hey i havent actually read the fics. i noticed you are added to my friends list. you like poetry/writing. i'm going to add you back, is that okay?

i will let you know that my lj is lacking on the writing front at the moment but i like to write aswell, if not about something ficticious, then about my life's events ... however mundane they are..

added.. :)
oh and i'm going to read when i get the chance

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[info]inkgeist
2007-07-11 09:35 pm UTC (link)
This is brilliant!!! Is there more? I want to see what this detention is going to be like - and if the young Severus and Remus can help Draco out :D

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